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He Lives On

He lives on forevermore And He stands at Heaven open door Though the world is full today Many will not enter on that Judgement Day Two thousand years ago He died Yet He lives on never denied He will be with us for all our life And keep us from the Devil's strife He lives on, and on, and on Never from us will He be gone He will be with us everywhere And meet our every care He lives on in our hearts And we will never be apart He lives on in our minds And the Lord He is so kind He lives on

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Constance La France

Date: 11/10/2009 10:30:00 AM

he walks beside us every step in life and in our last breath he will hold our hand... your words are stunning and meaningful..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/6/2009 8:59:00 AM

beautiful write, enjoyed today!

Jay Loveless

Date: 11/3/2009 11:33:00 AM

watching this event, if it makes you wanna cry or be sick then brilliant, transfer that into your poetry. with any subject...you wanna hit them with the full impact of your ability. and show them who YOU are inside...not only your christ. Xo Raiin

Jay Loveless

Date: 11/3/2009 11:32:00 AM

nice work. everyone has their own style writing, though i think your writing is good, try to expand your horizon a little and experiance new tecniques and subjects. write with your emotion from inside. try to write from the core of your being and drag your readers into your emotion...since this is a subject you like maybe write a piece about Jesus's cruxifixition from his or someone else's point. in that make them feel his pain and the pain of the witness, the pain that you feel while reading

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/3/2009 10:49:00 AM

Amen to that, Jamie. Your testimony of Jesus Christ is very strong and nicely stated in the beautiful poem. Keep writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann