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He Lands In It Footle

Took leap In deep Judgement Pungent Poor guy Knows why For Andrea's Footle

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/22/2014 11:26:00 AM

Still need to try out this form!! And what clever wordplay thrown in... *inserts footle in mouth*...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2014 1:28:00 PM

;0)

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/22/2014 9:12:00 PM

Nicely done !! I should have written a string, my single dangles rather lonely !! lol !

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2014 9:42:00 AM

Now these are 'proper' (according to rules); enjoyable string of fottles, Richard. Should do well in contest. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I didn't enter the other one.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 9:43:00 AM

My title would have been: "He lands his footle in it!" :))

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/20/2014 5:23:00 AM

Good to see poets having fun with this Footle Craze. These are really great! Poor guy stepped in Footle Puddle!

James Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 3:50:00 PM

Few words say a lot. Funny Footle Richard <*> good luck in the contest, James.....

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/19/2014 2:45:00 PM

I really do admire folks that can say so much in so few words. Me? I always seem to write a novel. Great footle, Richard. Good luck. Jim

Roy Jerden

Date: 8/19/2014 12:50:00 PM

Good one! (I like the skunk one a bit better). Good luck!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 10:47:00 AM

Nice one..:) like it..:) I'm thinking of strings but I'm finding hard hence settles for one but this three the connection is strong..:)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 1:23:00 PM

Oh man, thats good! These are so fun to read, :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 11:44:00 AM

Nice ones....lol

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/18/2014 10:30:00 AM

Wow nice ones Richard ! Like them all , best wishes in contest!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/18/2014 10:03:00 AM

Richard...Check out Andrea's blog about this. :) I've posted some footles there. Can't get up the nerve to post one as of yet. This is nice....I look the last one most! Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2014 10:00:00 AM

LOL I wish you could submit the others! Hugs Jan xxxx