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He Drove All Night

Many years ago Bess had a boyfriend Neal lived in a small town A long distance from Bess They met through a friend They spoke on the phone For hours chatting He asked for a date He wanted to treat The next day their date Early in the morn At 7:00 o'clock She heard a loud knock It was Neil at the door In the early morn They went for a drive Then to the movies They both wanted to see It not long until Bes heard him snoring Neal Neal drove all night To be together When tired he slept He slept suddenly Through the whole movie

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Date: 5/26/2022 8:54:00 AM
Been there, seen this, done this Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2022 10:23:00 AM
Hello Caren, oh yes this is something that can happen. You have proved it with your comment. Hugs.
Date: 5/10/2022 3:18:00 PM
lol How cute. I liked your poem, Darlene. There's no limit to what a guy or gal will do to be with someone they want to date. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 5/11/2022 5:05:00 AM
Hello Bill Thank you bill. Right there is no limit what a guy or girl will do to be together on a date. Your poetess friend Darlene
Date: 4/21/2022 4:22:00 AM
Hello my dear friend Darl! While reading your poem, I was reminded when I went to a movie with my date ha ha ha. I was the one who slept during the movie because I came from work, but I hope I did't snore. I enjoyed reading your well written poem my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful write. God bless and have a great day my dear friend. Hugs
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Date: 4/21/2022 6:23:00 AM
I pressed the T by mistake. sorry.
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Date: 4/21/2022 6:22:00 AM
Hello Len, Len I have seen many people fall asleep during the movies. I guess they came from work to see the movies. Then fall asleep. I did hear snoring. Thank you for the lovely comment my dear friend. God bless you. Thank you and you have a great day to my dear friend. Hugs. T
Date: 4/19/2022 5:49:00 AM
Hi...if she put up with it...then it must be love. I enjoyed the poem. Well Done.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2022 9:30:00 AM
Hello Mark, I agree if she is love with him it must be love. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 4/18/2022 6:52:00 PM
That was not such a 'moving' experience for the couple, I guess. lol. :)
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Date: 4/19/2022 5:38:00 AM
Hello Gershon, no I do not think it was a good date. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 4/18/2022 6:14:00 PM
hahaha,, my husband was a very loud snorer ... but he did not sleep through a movie
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Date: 4/19/2022 5:39:00 AM
Hello Eve, oh! That must have been rough on you at that time. It can happen to anyone couple. Hugs.
Date: 4/18/2022 11:23:00 AM
I love Bess! The way she handled this, seeing the dearness and goodness in Neal. This is precious. You get a Fav.. Blessings my friend!
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Date: 4/18/2022 3:38:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMino, thank you for the fav. I hope that you and your wife had a good Easter celebration. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 4/17/2022 11:33:00 AM
Hello Darlene ma'am, how are you? It is a lovely poem. Happy Easter. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 4/17/2022 12:35:00 PM
Hello plabi, I am fine thank you.Thank you for the lovely comment. Happy Easter to you. Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/15/2022 1:16:00 PM
A wonderful story/write. So True. The movies is a great place to sleep. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Date: 4/16/2022 5:43:00 PM
Hello Paula, Happy Easter. People do sleep at the movies because they find it boring or just plain tried. Hugs.
Date: 4/13/2022 11:36:00 AM
So she got to see it without being pawed? Aloha!
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Date: 4/13/2022 3:26:00 PM
Hello Rico, yes she got to see it without being pawed. Aloha! Darlene. Happy Easter.
Date: 4/13/2022 10:53:00 AM
Darlene, wonderful and delightful, I actually did that a lot when I was working night shifts in nursing, I was always tired and fell asleep everywhere ~Constance
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Date: 4/13/2022 3:30:00 PM
Hello constance, I have noticed in the movies lots of people fall asleep while watching a movie. Friendship & Love Darlene Happy Easter.

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