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He Didn'T Get It

"Where are you he asked" In my head I said He got angry Cause he couldn’t get there Told him no one could The bridge was burned In a fire in 04 A bad winter, you know He didn’t get it "You’re backwards in things you say" But you know what I mean When I say them Now don’t get so wounded It’s just a character evaluation The way he fidgets Gives me the church giggles And that boy gets so mad I don’t care Wonder how red he’ll get When I get up to Leave He won’t see He’s looking over his shoulder at another boy Another to chase after "Where are you he asked" In my head I said Now don’t get so wounded It’s just a character evaluation And that boy gets so mad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2009 6:18:00 PM
it's good but don't just write one! :p keep going let creativity flow when you can!
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Date: 7/11/2009 4:26:00 AM
Hello and welcome to our family here at PoetrySoup Jonathan. Good writing. Hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2009 5:12:00 PM
Funny. Nice work. Sara
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