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He Did It All

Tears stream down my face as I look above at the glistening sky and wonder why. Why did everything end? He did it all. Always caught me at my fall Always cared to mend. It never bothered, the way he did. Soon he realized wasn't worth life when i saw him with that old bloody knife. As i lie here, dreaming of something more He is out there, creeping out a never-ending door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/30/2009 2:42:00 PM
Nicely written poem Ileana>>James
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:40:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ileana. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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