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Home » Poems » Maryam Jameela Haniff » He

He

HE H idden beneath, words untold E xisting as, my dreams unfold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Izzy Gumbo
Date: 2/6/2009 10:39:00 AM
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Yes. Brilliantly said. Thanks for the welcome! I like the soup!
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Michael Degenhardt
Date: 2/6/2009 5:59:00 AM
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A perfect acrostic set to a wonderful rhyme. Nicely done! Michael
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Date: 1/17/2009 12:14:00 PM
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Much said in just two lines. Creative use of the acrostic form. Nice job! I enjoyed it. Keep on writing. Karen
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James Faulkner
Date: 1/14/2009 10:26:00 PM
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great write. i really enjoyed this short read. love and peace.-james
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/13/2009 5:20:00 PM
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A neat ACROSTIC with a wonderful message... if you connected the H & E no one would know! Best wishes, Keith
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Derrick Burton
Date: 1/13/2009 10:25:00 AM
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hshort powerful poetry. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry and this was short, yet effective. have a blessed day.
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Serenity D'Nae Montgomery
Date: 1/13/2009 9:29:00 AM
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that's really good :)
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