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Hawaii Or Stratford

A collaboration with Annalise Brigham On cold wintry days when my thoughts take flight I‘m off to the great Pacific and her tropical lands All exotic remnants of paradise in plain sight How like footprints they seem upon the ocean, grand Lush, vibrant green foliage and the richest colors ignite As palms dance the Hula under a dazzling sun Encircled by warm trade winds infusing daily delight As four islands still evolving, offer us endless fun! The four Hawaiian Islands- Honolulu, Kauai, Maui and Oahu I wander through the town in which he lived, Believe I feel his presence all around. I visit places that he must have loved: His childhood home, the church and New Place ground. I lay a single rose upon his grave, Sincerely wishing that he would appear; I close my eyes and, smiling, think of him. Ah, I love Stratford, home of Will Shakespeare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/24/2014 10:58:00 PM
I enjoyed co-writing this with you Jack! It was kind of you to ask my friend. You're such a good writer, it was easy and fun! Great job as always! xxx Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:18:00 PM
yes, I saw this at Karen's site and left a comment there. Wonderful work , both of you!!
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Date: 1/23/2014 6:23:00 PM
You both are quite the artisans here my friends! Jack you are quite creative, I love the lovely way you have made this poem! What a fantastic piece, quite the remarkable poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/23/2014 4:45:00 PM
Interesting work..Choices that we have in life and what did you choose?...Great work the two of you..Thanks for the visits..Sara
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