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Having Witnessed

My eyes now captured Pertness shaped enticing me Bloused now aroused Thumb and finger now linger Their captivity beckons .

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2015 5:46:00 PM

Creative way to go with this passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Sara, your comments are always appreciated, James :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 1:15:00 PM

Simmering with passion, dear James. What a gift you have for arousing romantic feelings! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 5:09:00 PM

Thank you kindly Carolyn. The wandering mind of a Highlander putting thoughts to paper, hugs//James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/15/2015 2:52:00 AM

well, Dino James, summer is starting... :)! //olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 7:42:00 AM

well I mean your poem beats a summery heat James.. :)! weeeeeeeee!! blossom amidst the blossoms.. :)! i like that.. :)! I never experienced winter yet.. :) someday maybe.. :O! //olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 7:43:00 AM

Summer will follow, but Spring surely has arrived, for blossoms will soon paint some beautiful scenes. No better scene than a blossom amidst the blossoms Oliz, soon I'll see my words every season, hugs//James xx