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Having Left You

Now my head is free wrong to right please let it be. To love you again. © Harry J Horsman 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2020 5:42:00 PM
and this adorable senryu as well. I have many other faves, but gotta get back to work now!!
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Date: 9/8/2010 3:09:00 AM
wow-- this sure is moving Harry-- so much emotion in these 3 lines---and that last line just grabs the heart... nikko :)
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Date: 8/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
lovely and emotional, made me tear right up....
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:40:00 PM
very good true to life visual, harry. I LOVE good senryu and haiku. Charles
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:53:00 PM
Harry, just wanted you to know how much your comments mean to me. Thanks so much! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:45:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, thanks for your comments on my work!!
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:31:00 AM
Sweet wish..to love again...Great write, Harry. If it's for the contest good luck! Emily
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:56:00 PM
Comment your poem already.. Ty for the lovely comments Harry,..p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:49:00 AM
Well written, Harry!...I had few troubles with my eyes and could not spent time at my computer but now it's ok again...All the best!...Gert
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Date: 8/14/2010 2:34:00 AM
How beautiful this senryu is Harry. Thanks so much for commenting on my acrostic. Sydney was a second home for a few years and I miss it. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:59:00 PM
oh, I love this, harry. Is it for that one contest? I hope so! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:59:00 PM
a fav
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:09:00 PM
WELCOME TO LOVE*SKAT
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:19:00 PM
Good job in this one..Hope that the love is true and lifetime warranty...Sara
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:32:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Harry and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 9:17:00 AM
Such a heartfelt senryu, Harry. If it is meant to be, this love will be restored to your life. Sometimes we have to leave behind those who don't return our affection. It's sad if you are going through this right now, dear. You seem to have such a loving, kind heart. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:44:00 AM
Wonderful Senryu Harry.. regrets we all hve like this .. but we move forward.. good luck in the contest.. enjoyed and happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/13/2010 5:31:00 AM
Hopeful write Harry, hope you are having a great day, Wilma
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Date: 8/13/2010 12:13:00 AM
Enjoyed Harry,..p.d.
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Date: 8/13/2010 12:07:00 AM
Emotional write my friend.
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