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Painting by Lin Lane

It's been years since we walked away from each other. Long ago, I stopped looking back because I was afraid that I'll not see your footprints following behind me. Each time I dared turn my head; they'd faded a bit more. With every hesitant step I've taken, I've wondered... have I become nothing more than a pale phantom to you. A memory, a ghost, who disappeared from view. Do you no longer remember me; my name did you forget? Or have you missed me and feel grievous sorrow and regret? Maybe by now I'm just a delusion carried along on the wind. Traces of you will always cling to me, a scent undenied and in tears I cried, like raindrops falling from brooding clouds. If afternoon showers could cleanse me of loving you, I'd call out to the thunder god for a rage-filled storm. My heart has never forgiven me for walking away from you. I feel it beat more quickly on those dark and dreary days when I think I hear your footfalls catching up to me. I dare not turn around for fear of what I would not see.

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Date: 2/14/2024 1:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem, I never forget!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/14/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Art.
Date: 2/13/2024 9:17:00 AM
Lin, I see you are an artist and the painting is lovely. My experience has been that things trigger emotional experiences that surface like an unseen submarine...but there it is. When thinking about these sudden feelings, I sometimes don't understand why the grief strikes when it does and why I even feel it since life doesn't go back. However, at least we get to contemplate the beautiful and thought provoking way you describe this. Your words and wisdom is a gift for me. TY!!
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Date: 2/14/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Duke, and your sweet comments are a delightful and valuable gift to me. Thank you for the kind compliments on my poetry and painting. Both are greatly appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2024 7:11:00 PM
Dear Lin, The rawness of your emotions hits home, the fear of fading memories and the ache of unspoken regrets. You strategically developed the imagery of wind-carried memories and cleansing thunderstorms, reflecting the turmoil within. Your poem leaves a powerful question unanswered, urging us to contemplate the complexities of letting go and the possibility of reconnection. Lin your poem is a compelling exploration of love, loss, and the desire for what might have been. Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/11/2024 8:40:00 AM
Hi Daniel and thank you for wonderful feedback. It's been years of wondering about 'what if,' but I'll answer the question for you now. He called with apologies after 11 years and the reconnection has given us a renewed friendship. Nothing more, but that's enough for closure of love that was lost (never really disappears completely) but it's enough that we can laugh together again.
Date: 2/10/2024 2:52:00 PM
you've penned an emotionally poignant poem of longing and wondering after love is lost. You captured the feelings of emptiness, pondering, anger, and regret quite well, well enough that I became misty eyed. What a painful experience for you. The painting added a special touch. How talented you are, dear Lin. Have to fave this poem because it's 'real!' Have a splendid weekend, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/10/2024 2:54:00 PM
awww, Sara, you so deeply feel my emotions, even when I'm still writing them years later. The pain has lessened, but they still come to mind with a thought, a song... Thank you dear friend for knowing me.
Date: 2/10/2024 12:30:00 PM
It's often hard to let go even when you know it has ended, you can't help but look back. Quite an emotional write Lin, I love the painting. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/10/2024 2:53:00 PM
It truly is, Tom. We can't keep memories at bay... the good and the ones we'd rather not call to mind. Thank you so very much, Tom.
Date: 2/10/2024 12:01:00 PM
Sometimes what we don’t see is much scarier than what we do Lin, and you describe this absence and longing of what could’ve been, quite poignantly and beautifully, an expertly penned and crafted piece of art, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/10/2024 2:52:00 PM
David, sometimes it's difficult to deal with answers to questions we shouldn't ask, for fear of receiving an answer we don't want. I value each adverb you used to appreciate my lines. Thank you so very kindly.
Date: 2/10/2024 9:49:00 AM
oh my goodness Lin, your poem complements the picture so so well - you know how much I adore that image and the ghostly imagery of lost love is breathtaking - a massive fave! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2024 10:35:00 AM
Hi Jan. Of all My paintings, this one has always been your favorite. Thank for being such a great friend through the years. Hugs.

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