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Have you ever played with it? Even if just a bit. Or thrown it. Because you were in a snit. Did you ever eat it? Then throw out the pit. Or caught it. In your mitt. Would you yell at it? In a momentary fit. Or might you with it? Have a comfortable sit. When annoyed by it. Is it your teeth you grit? When you didn’t get it. Where you called a half-wit? Have you ever flown it? I mean sat in the cockpit. Have you assembled it? From a bought kit. And when you want it Do you go ahead and commit. Have you stayed with it? While you had to housesit. Did you rub or hide it? Under your armpit. Or somehow lost it. And have to admit. It was you misplaced it. Who then was mad and backbit? Took off with it. Like a bandit. Have you stood on it? Held on to the bowsprit. And while you were on it Did you catch a net of brit? Or were you on it? With a friendly Brit. Did you really decide to do it? Because you two were close-knit. Have done with it. Because it’s unfit. Well what about it? Are you the culprit? That’s the thing about it. You just submit. I mean to it. Like it’s backlit. I still mean it. Like it’s sunlit. Still speaking of it As if purposely moonlit. Have you ever done it? Did you to love submit? When you come down to it. It is just a tidbit. I have often succeeded in buying it. I usually did with my available credit. And if I couldn’t use it. Would they think me a dimwit? I know very well of it It passed me in a flit. What is it? Made me omit. That sometimes it. Can be an outfit. Or that at some other times it. Can be nothing more than a zit. Did you ever showcase it? Had it floodlit. Or did Nature feature it Was it also starlit? Did beauty surround it? Would it a King befit? And who paid for it? Did you pick up the chit? When I have eaten it. I sometimes did emit. When I stayed out in it. I ended up being frostbit. And if it. Involves a slit. Well then it. Would be twilit. Did they believe it When you said it was leg it. My mom did it. Yes she would knit. Also my friend sprayed it. Afraid it was a nit. Use a banana with it. To make a split. To talk into it. Only to transmit. To send it. Your honed wit. To do it. Never quit. Perform it. In a skit. Receive it. An unwanted writ. What about it. Are you unfit? Chewed on it. Only to spit. Or write it. In Sanskrit. It can be when it comes right down to it Oops, well I declare yes a tit and that's it!
Maurice Yvonne Sept. 2 2014 Judy Konos

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Date: 9/3/2014 9:10:00 PM
I said TAG YOUR IT... JK
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:36:00 AM
no tag your it.
Date: 9/3/2014 5:48:00 PM
Maurice. I really relate to the way you grasp onto something and give IT your all. I have done this often when I write. I love to just dig in and do all I can do with certain words, etc. This was pretty cool!! quite an interesting entry for Declare it. I want to do the story about the hot dog eater!!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 6:03:00 PM
hahahaha. that is so funny Andrea. yeah go for the hot dog story. it was her idea. being a student of human nature i would say the hot dog one is the winner.
Date: 9/3/2014 3:28:00 PM
This is fun and witty all in one, Maurice! You kept the flow going throughout this long tag....I enjoyed it to the last IT! Well done! // paul
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 3:56:00 PM
thank you my new friend. i am going to enjoy reading your poems.
Date: 9/3/2014 1:34:00 PM
Ha Ha, I love TAG poetry, ... Sometimes, I wish the soup had a TAG button on here. Where we can go and tag poems, and compare them with our own. Other poetry sites have it:). Anyways, I'm off subject. Anyways, Maurice, this was it, fit, zit,... LOL. I love the flow, and rhyme. XOOL.... Love Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 2:38:00 PM
another great visit by you. thank you.
Date: 9/3/2014 9:13:00 AM
I wasn't thinking I declare but rather What the heck then when I got to the you killed me. Good luck in the contest.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 12:11:00 PM
nice of you to visit. thank you for your support.
Date: 9/3/2014 8:29:00 AM
Dear Maurice, while reading your poem, I was wondering what you were describing. Very cool punch line at the end that had me laughing out loud. Sending winning wishes for you in Judy's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 8:39:00 AM
thank you. Congratulations on your sonnet contest win.
Date: 9/2/2014 7:35:00 PM
haha this is unique! Fun to read! best of luck in the contest, this was a great entry and I am sure I will be back again to read it. :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 8:35:00 AM
thank you Casarah congratulations on your sonnet first place win.

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