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Haunted Soul

Flies of misery Eyes of pain stare my haunted soul my lifes a plegful tub of hate, with satans red hot coals lord lift my soul from the devils hands so i will be your saint an i can save my brothers soul from SINNFUL, LUSTFUL, HATE. lord touch my mind and save my soul for all my familys sake. so they will see my highest peak, on the mountain of a saint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/1/2009 8:39:00 AM
This is a wonderful tribute to your devout faith, Tevin! It reads as a heartfelt prayer. Without faith, souls can be haunted for eternity. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2009 5:48:00 AM
Well done...nice writing.
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Date: 5/1/2009 4:18:00 AM
ahhhhh!!! to exist on a higher plane of inspiration........well done!! tevin! you are on your way!! Jim
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Date: 4/14/2009 8:13:00 AM
dark and loaded very well done
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:37:00 AM
Keep mesmerizing readers. All the best.
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:33:00 AM
Very deep and moving introspection and heartfelt prayer. Your title is perfect for this insightful write! Great job! Welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:52:00 AM
he hears all your pleas so raise your hands high as you seek the Lord..and you shall see the highest peak... Blessings to you & yours. Cheryl
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:59:00 AM
Touched me deeply. What a great write. Nice job.
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