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In that haunted house by the hill where nobody now dares to dwell abides an spirit of such evil so great for you or me to get near So long ago in the days of yore a well-to-do family lived there their soul fed it with so much sin and debauchery they never did heed So they partied and made merry til' the end and unspeakable orgies there took place things that no decent soul would comtemplate in secrecy they smeared the town with all their filth But as everything must come to end be either good or bad so a very dark and forboding night they all went too far for in their debauchery and cruel games a deadly and final price did all of them have to pay Since then that night in this house by the hill horrible screams mixed with sobbings can be heard misterious noises that no one can ever explain and your blood will chill in your veins if you ever dare to visit the haunted house by the hill. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,31,2014

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Date: 11/3/2014 11:46:00 AM
powerful piece of writing dorian excellent pen dear friend the moon smiling upside down boo then smiles
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:58:00 PM
Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D "
Date: 10/31/2014 5:47:00 PM
I don't think that I would want to go there..A very scary Halloween tale..Greetings to you on this memorial night..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 8:41:00 PM
Thank you ! And Greetings back to you Sara! ;) xxxx D.
Date: 10/31/2014 5:45:00 PM
ooh a chilling write just right for Halloween:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 8:46:00 PM
I wrote this one out of the blue Jan. Lucky for me, that my muse was in the Halloween mood ;) thank you and hugs to you too! xxx D.

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