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Haunted House

They cling to both my legs in terror My little ones who just wanted a thrill Approached with laughing anticipation The haunted house just filled the bill...... First was the bowl of white eyeballs That floated in what seemed to be blood A hand reached out from the middle The shrieks of horror came in a flood Then a skeleton who slept in a coffin Sat up and shrieked with all its might His hand reached for the nearest child They screamed in wonderful fright Evil black bats kept flying above us And their fangs were a sight to behold A bite on the neck was anticipated Bloody shreiks their enjoyment told I could hardly walk their hold so tight Ages six to nine and two in-between After a cup of hot cocoa they confided They'd never had a better Halloween.... A true story for the Halloween contest.. Barbara Gorelick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Barb. Outstanding write. Great story. Nice going. Thanks for you comments. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Halloween Fun" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win, Barbara! One year when I was in high school (many, many, many...years ago) I worked in a "Haunted House". It was fun. Kim
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:37:00 AM
Now this is a scary true write, must admit it would rattle me too....Congrats on a original and deserving win...luv Michael
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:57:00 PM
I think this might have been too scary for me. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/20/2011 5:28:00 PM
Well done Barbara... such a great poem...thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:00:00 AM
such a cute ending. Kids DO like to get scared , don't they?But only when an adult is around for reassurance!
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:43:00 PM
Just a great representation of Halloween. Well done. Lee
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