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Haunted

Tiptoeing inside an entrance that held unknown mysteries of a slain clan, draped photographs flickered with low-lit candelabras of Halloween eve. I ran up the steps as my heels cracked on through a nightfall's twirl ... the moon quivering like a ghoul's shadow while rotten windows banged! And the door reeled of odor around walls, sipping the pungent air that hindered my echoes from squeaking heavily among a pile of crushed leaves. Interior bleakness brought more dread as tendrils of red mould hanged on cobwebs dripping like spurts of blood...alone, I turned to leave: my skirt rushing away from the ancient house and its eerie view. Glancing at the ruined structure from a distance, fallen grasses seemed to blink: my disheveled hair meshing on a ripped treat- o- trick basket as I quickly escaped, panting into the thick fog without a candle in the mist. Your Own Favorite Halloween Contest Sponsor: Carol Eastman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/13/2015 2:44:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 10/12/2015 11:34:00 PM
Awesome write n win nette! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/9/2015 6:50:00 PM
Nice win nette!
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:29:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Have a Happy Halloween!
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Date: 11/6/2014 7:46:00 AM
Oh Nette ,the moon shook,wonderful; congrats on this outstanding Performance.
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette. Incredible haunting story.
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Date: 11/5/2014 11:36:00 AM
Haunting imagery and personification contribute to a captivating write. Congratulations on a deserved win, Nette!! // paul
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:03:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your fine win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:50:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2014 9:53:00 PM
The very detailed imagery just added a wonderful creepiness to this ghost story. A chilling tale that got my heart pounding! Congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 10/7/2014 6:12:00 PM
Great poem. Great read.
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Date: 9/16/2014 9:20:00 AM
Good Halloween stuff, nette, I like the way you describe bodily effects, Love, daver
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Date: 9/15/2014 3:45:00 PM
oh I feel chilled reading this Nette - an awesome write:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:48:00 PM
All the elements of classic suspense woven together. Impressive work, Words! Perfect ending, Nette, hauntingly creepy.
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:51:00 AM
- Chilling reading ..... you need a hand to hold, dear Nette ! - Enjoy reading ....... exciting - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:06:00 AM
O Creepy feel..... Spine chilling imagery. Vivid description spooky....
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:47:00 AM
Heart-pumping scenes here which make my jaw drop. Terrific poem, Nette, and glad to see I got your nod in the florette contest. Thank you!
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:10:00 AM
Very scary write, nette, giving thrills while reading. Is it for a contest?
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..It reads like a very scary place..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits ..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:51:00 PM
Excellent!!!!
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:34:00 PM
Freakingly excellent. I'm beginning to like how you play with this genre. Wow, Nette.
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:39:00 PM
I could feel your fright as I read. That is magic in the reading my friend!!! Bravo!!!!!
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