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Haunted

He'd haunted the pub all his life and died at the bar with his wife. 'He's haunting it now that he's dead - I knew that would happen,' she said. written 26th February for Constance's H words ('Haunted') contest

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Date: 3/2/2023 1:17:00 AM
Jack, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2023 10:18:00 AM
- Always in the pub ... night and day ... at least his wife knows where he is ... a good one, Jack :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:50:00 AM
You are so great with few words, Jack! His life in a nutshell and a perfect last line! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2023 11:09:00 AM
I can picture the people and the pub - great poem condensing personality into just a few lines
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