Hated Job

Heaps of debris piled in manner hodgepodge. I truly hate job of cleaning garage. Won # 5 in contest

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Shani Fassbender

Date: 10/2/2011 6:24:00 PM

Great couplet, Joyce!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 12:54:00 PM

Oh my! This really is a dreadful job, Joyce, and few can keep up with it. Things just seem to land in garages when there's nowhere else to put them. Great work! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:28:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 11:12:00 PM

Way to go with your win here, Joyce. Congratulations to you.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/27/2011 2:18:00 AM

But what are garages for..? you know i think you could write a poem on this Joyce, (ha ha)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 9:11:00 PM

hmmm, I always get out of that one since Joe is in charge of it. hahaha. He doesn't do anything else though AT ALL!!

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/24/2011 3:50:00 PM

nobody likes that chore I don't think..very good ..love,Deb

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2011 3:01:00 PM

Yes, I can relate to this one, Joyce. Many congrats on your wins too, of course