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Hate Me Now

Hate me now when you can still find your way back home Hate me now to see what is good for you Hate me now when your view of me is not what you see Hate me now in the morning for your meaningful afternoon Hate me now in this sunny noon so I can melt with the sun set Hate me now before the crack of dawn for your redefinition Hate me now for what I didn’t do for you Hate you now for all the things u didn’t do for me Hate you now when I can also find myself another home Hate you now for all the promises you never live up to Hate you now for I see the sun shines again for me Hate us together for all the thing we didn’t achieved

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 6/8/2014 11:23:00 AM

Wow, great poem, Foluso. Although their is indeed sadness in this piece, I feel such a piece with amazing imagery such as this piece, is enjoyable for any poet to read. Keep up the great work. BTW, check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.

Foluso Fapohunda
Date: 6/8/2014 6:26:00 PM

Thanks

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/26/2013 10:13:00 AM

I as a reader ..love your style wish to replace Hate with Love , feeling your sadness.

Foluso Fapohunda
Date: 9/27/2013 1:39:00 AM

Thank you Yvette Kelley

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/26/2013 10:16:00 AM

Every 3 lines L O V E ! I like your poem .