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Hate

Hate Hate, hate, Hate It all goes with my fate I try to conceal it But it starts to eat me inside Hate is the nasty, big black color I picture it as a burned flower Searching for colorful things But it just can't find the world around it I try to eat hate Man! It's as hard as biltong It tastes like chewing sand That makes me irritated! Hate is the wild monster Invading every red heart Draining every blood it had Pouring ashes onto the heart hate smells like rotten meat whenever a dog pass by; It stops to smell the horrible aroma Quickly the dog hurries away hate is the sound of mucus spitted on the floor, “Spurt!” It disgusts everyone Yuck! It makes me vomit Hate bullies me It forces me to be negative with its gigantic red eyes It frightens me Hate refuses to have companions To have friendly faces Even smiles and laughter is not permitted hate is a disastrous idol! Hate you are nothing But trash to anything you ever invaded so unlock my heart And leave me in peace By Martha Jonas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/2/2017 3:05:00 AM
love your work, keep writting
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:50:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:03:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:02:00 PM
good imagery, very vivid
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:42:00 PM
Martha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:08:00 AM
Martha, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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