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Hate

hate Its a strong word, but some of these feelings are absurd. im confused... was it not what i beleived? was it a phony plan concieved ? to just use me? if so i hate you ... so much have to thank you. for without your fake love it wouldnt of been so clear, to see tha man above. and when i say i hate you.... i really hate me tha way i was. Fake hopes,Fake dreams,Fake love is all that it seems.

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Date: 11/29/2018 4:02:00 PM
I like that line "When I say I hate you I really hate me the way I was.." That’s actually a brilliant observation written into an honest statement. Good job.
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