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Has Anyone Seen My Sister Out There

Has anyone seen my sister out there? She's the little girl with the dark brown hair. I am eight and she is three and we like to play hide and seek, you see. This time she hid much better than last. But finally I found her, just not quite as fast. Has anyone seen my sister out there? She's the third grader with the dark brown hair. I am fourteen and she is nine and she wanted to play with my friends and I. But because we are older and more mature, She felt left out and got her feelings hurt. She ran away but I'm afraid she'll get lost, I left to go find her even if losing my friends was the cost. Finally I found her, she made it home, but she was mad and told me to leave her alone. Has anyone seen my sister out there? She's the teenager with the dark brown hair. I am twenty-one and she is sixteen and it's hard to keep track of a newly driving teen. I wanted to spend some time, just her and me, But she is always with friends and has places to be. I finally found her, she was hanging out with friends. Luckily I know that this phase will soon end. Has anyone seen my sister out there? She's the gorgeous little lady with the dark brown hair. I am twenty-four and she is nineteen, we have become best friends at this age, you see. Our days are chaotic with work and school, But at the end of the day we come home and talk it through. My sister and I have shared this life, the ups and downs and even some strife. She knows my soul and can make me laugh. She's my friend for life and always has my back. But one summer night something felt wrong, My sister wasn't home yet, she was taking too long. My sister went away to a place in the sky, But I still look for her in each day that goes by. Has anyone seen my sister out there? She's the beautiful angel with the dark brown hair.

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Date: 9/27/2016 7:36:00 AM
Oh Sara... So sadly beautiful... My sis went missing for three months and ended up an angel..I'm so sorry if this is true...:)-luloo
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Sara Mattingly
Date: 9/27/2016 10:25:00 AM
Unfortunately, it is not fictional. My 19 year old sister died on June 16, 2016 when a tree fell on her car while she was driving down the road. She was my best friend. I miss her more and more each day that passes. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 9/27/2016 3:01:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sara. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:48:00 PM
Sara M, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/23/2016 11:06:00 PM
So lovely Sara,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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