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Harvey and the Sonic Spin Ball

Harvey And The Sonic Spin ball Harvey went to Alton Towers with his granddad and his brother Harvey is the eldest so he could go without his mother Granddad sat behind him whilst on the Sonic Spin ball they went Harvey looked so proud as the they started their decent Granddad sitting behind him a look of horror on his face As Harveys’ stomach lurched past him, and nearly caught him in the face Harvey felt his stomach leave him at the first tight bend He hoped to catch up with it when the ride did come to an end. Granddad hung on tight trying to pat Harveys’ little shoulder, But he couldn’t lift his arms up, he was trembling all over The Sonic Spin ball car reached the first bend up high and twisted round Harvey screamed so loud and looked, but he could not see the ground Harvey was thrown this way and that way twisted and turned He never really knew how much his stomach could leap and feel so churned The ride came slowly to a dead halt Harvey jumped down from his seat Poor granddad sitting behind him could hardly feel his feet. Granddad stood straight and tall and declared, well boys what a treat. Our day in Alton Towers is through and now I can retreat Just remind me the next time you want me to take you anywhere I think I may just prefer to take up smoking and sit in an old rocking chair.

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Date: 11/19/2012 11:37:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Is Alton Towers a Park like our 6 flags or Disneyland theme Park. I went on a ride called space Mountain it took 3 hours to uncurl my fingers. I hang with Granddad Sitting in the rocking chair great POEM LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 9/27/2012 8:55:00 AM
going there soon, love the poem,
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Date: 11/17/2011 4:53:00 AM
The next time that you come to visit we'll take you Cedar Point, (Look it up)
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Date: 11/17/2011 5:16:00 AM
Ok will do and watch out I may hold you to it.x

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