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Harvest Moon

The sky is bright tonight, The harvest moon a beacon Eclipsing city lights, Its orange glow a fire That sets the sky aflame And turns stray clouds Into puffs of smoke - A haze of grey and gold That envelops me And hurls me back in time To that silver shore Where sand scatters like ashes, Where your breath is the tide That steals mine, Your pulse the current That speeds mine. I could lie here for all time - For a moment With salt in my hair And rapture in my heart. Beneath a sky of staring stars, A thousand eyes that blink With wary wonder At our courage to lie so close To the blurred edge, Where waves tear up the shore Like icy claws or eager fingers, Desperate for a touch, For an illusion - A moment of warmth. The sky is bright tonight, The harvest moon a menace Invading my mind's eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/3/2013 1:31:00 PM
I came back to your very first poem that I repsonded to in NOvember. I was so right what I said here!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 2:58:00 PM
I need to keep my eye on you. I think from what I have seen of your poetry, you are a really good writer!! This poem, for example, has the kind of devices I believe a good free verse poem should show! Keep commenting to me so I remember you. Once I get to seeing someone a number of times, they become imprinted on me!!
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Date: 8/7/2012 2:30:00 PM
Great visuals. It drew me in beautifully.
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:42:00 AM
Ohhh....so lovely write Heather....I could stay here for all time... - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:43:00 AM
wow what an invasion,great write Heather
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Heather Ober
Date: 7/1/2012 9:47:00 PM
Thanks, Richard! :)
Date: 5/8/2012 5:36:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Heather. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:08:00 PM
Heather teriffic imagery,,..David
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/7/2012 7:12:00 PM
Thank you! :)

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