Harmony

"In harmony, simultaneously, we live vicariously for our monogamy." Give me your best one liner contest Sponsor: Silent One ~Written: December 4, 2015~

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/22/2016 7:04:00 AM

I love your take on this one, Laura.... Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 7:38:00 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 2:44:00 PM

awesome one liner and win . Congrats!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/18/2016 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations, Laura!! I am pleased to be reading this one-liner again after a lapse of some months. ~ Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2016 10:58:00 AM

Hi Luloo, I liked the message in this one liner. Congrats on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/18/2016 10:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win..this is so romantic esp the pic. I like it. :) Sunita

Jesse Day

Date: 7/17/2016 11:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/17/2016 10:04:00 PM

Congrats! Luloo...a well deserved win...god bless...^WW^

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/17/2016 9:23:00 PM

A 7 for this winning one-liner, Luloo. Janice

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2016 9:04:00 PM

I'm still thinking about it, congratulations LuLoo...

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/17/2016 6:52:00 PM

A lovely one-liner, Luloo, and very uplifting. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/17/2016 6:12:00 PM

Dear Laura, I'm trying to understand your one-liner. Let's see if I got it right: Together, at the same time, we live life on the edge, all to protect monogamy? Congrats on your placement. ;-)

Lu Loo
Date: 7/19/2016 12:00:00 PM

very good Tom, thank you :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/7/2015 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations for your amazing #1 placement of your one liner in the cotest!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/7/2015 4:12:00 PM

Thank you very much Teddy...I will be taking a short break from PS, thank you for your support...be blessed -lu *smiles*

Grace Mutindi

Date: 12/7/2015 5:21:00 AM

This is great Laura, congrats on your big win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/6/2015 1:27:00 AM

Wow brilliant take Laura loo.. Congrats on top place win!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/6/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thank you very much!! :)-lu *Smiles*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:29:00 PM

very cool, Laura. BIG congrats on a number one win.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 9:16:00 PM

Thank you Andrea:)-lu *Smiles*

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2015 6:20:00 PM

An excellent one-liner with a message to go with it! Congratulations, Laura...a deserved first place!:) {what about Laura Luki, instead:)} ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 8:01:00 PM

Thanks Paul! I had an issue with someone from my past looking me up and it was a crazy issue last night. So I changed my name...even though I think it doesn't matter? I didn't know what to do...lol

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Nayda:)-*smiles*

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 12:00:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats LU LOO lol:-) hugs Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 12:17:00 PM

Sad when that happens Lu - stay strong:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 12:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan! :) I know it's weird I changed my name, but I realized anyone can search me on google and read all my poems. Does that make sense? I feel dumb for changing it but I freaked out last night I had an incident with someone in my past...eeeeekkkkk! Many thanks :)-*smiles*

Curtis Johnson

Date: 12/5/2015 11:48:00 AM

Laura. I love this! Congrats on your win. Blessings. Curtis.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2015 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Curtis :)-*Smiles*