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Harder Than Most

On this cool morning I am gripped by the truth-screaming change of the temperature of the breeze in my hair and realize in this slipping away of time that I am now headed for an unknown winter that could be long, and cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/19/2011 11:19:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Tracy. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2009 11:37:00 PM
Are you, by chance, in New York? Brrrr! Seriously, though, this is fantastic! I can't wait to read the other pieces you've posted. I'm swiftly becoming a fan! Donna G.
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Date: 10/12/2008 9:59:00 AM
wow this gave a clear view to winter. Beautiful write Tracy. Something very deep within the rich imagery I believe. Thanks for your appreciation on my poems. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:51:00 AM
Amazing hexaverse! Im an admirer for now, I dont know if I can do this hehehe! Brgds. George
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:50:00 AM
Amazing hexaverse! Im an admirer for now, I dont know if I can do this hehehe! Brgds. George
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Date: 10/12/2008 4:51:00 AM
Yes, oh and I bet she will sting (but with such a good, hard, cleansing sting - a needed bite). excellent Dim.hex, Tracey, loved this one, very emotional and visual. Love me.
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Date: 10/11/2008 8:39:00 AM
Hope not. Perhaps it will sparkle with things silver and new. Wishing you a wondrous and magical winter filled with love. : ) Yes, I do love this form that you have completely mastered and do miracles with. Thanks about the contest. Much love, Shar
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Date: 10/11/2008 8:36:00 AM
Boy Tracy isn't that the truth - Listen in the second stanza first line I believe you left the "I" out - "and I realize" would give you the syllable count of four - Please don't think I'm being rude I just know I would like to be told - Great use of this form - God Bless and have a wonderful Saturday
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