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Hard Drive

For months I’ve partitioned – sectored my strife Trying to determine – wrong from the right Clinging to bits – healing the bytes Moving and changing – formatting new life My career crashed – with it my dreams Memory erased – circuits burned clean Connection to love – garbled and crossed Power was fading – all color lost A new system needed – more power and thrill New creativity – speed and the skill Designing new backup – restoring my line Application of will – turn tables on time Tap my known current – discarding old woes Erase obsolete system – vanquish all foes Move to the center – empower self trust Stun all the comers – lightning fast thrust No longer lie down – and wait for the call Stand up and fight – pin them to the wall Knowing I’m better – than any machine Time to arise – from a protracted dream And so I forgo – all advice of claimed best Listen inside – put myself to the test It’s hard but I’m winning – getting better by day Pain is less troubling – I’ll continue this way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 12/21/2008 12:49:00 AM
Jim, Congratulations on YOUR featured POEM "Hard Drive being Featured this week on the SOUP I agree with Sue about the b.s. Hope all is well with YOU as all ten of YOUR POEMS were written in half an hour 5/15/05 If so Welcome to the SOUP and come on back I do wish YOU a Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS a Healthy and Prosperous Year...HG
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:21:00 PM
When you get my age, hard drive is too harsh ... better soft drive and peace of mind than competitive b.s. ... LOL ... loved this write, Jim. Its a well-deserved selection to be a feature of the week here at the Soup. Hope your holidays are warm, wonderful and that '09 is a great year for you!
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:46:00 PM
Jim - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:18:00 PM
Hi Jim, Congratulations on your feature of the week. lainie
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2008 5:14:00 PM
This is a struggle most will relate to. Interesting style in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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