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Hard Day's Write

It's been a hard day's write . And I've been workin' at this screen . It's been a hard day's write. Ain't nothin' happening. I'm feelin' mean . But then , when I get that rush It happens all of a gush. You know I feel alright . You know I work all day And then dash home to My PoetrySoup . And it's worth readin' what they have to say Those brilliant writers Yeah ! , what a troupe . But then , what I like the best Is writing for a contest. You know I feel alright . I haiku Limerick or strictly in rhyme . Then I'll do Free verse and all out of time .... time .. yeah ! It's been a hard day's write. Brian Strand can do it and Rhoda too . Mrs. O'Leary - George and Devonshire Caryl and Catie , to name a few . But when I read Caroline , Dane-Ann and Joyce chill my spine You know I feel alright .... You know I feel alright . Inspired by John's Beatlemania contest . Sing to the air of " Hard Day's Night ".

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Date: 5/1/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congrat..Dont' know how i missed this ...awesome.. dear friend.......Charma
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:51:00 AM
Loved it immensely, what talent!
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Date: 2/24/2010 12:22:00 PM
Great job Sean.. did u enter the new one from John yet? .. its fun to do these kinds of contest.. my entry is Dynamic Duo on the Sondheim & Sondheim contest... luv the Beatles too.. cute references to those special poets here.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/18/2010 10:05:00 AM
A seven is a lucky number Sean. Smile! Congratulations, Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations Sean, You did it well! Your BEATLEMANIA SING-ALONG poem is among the winners in the contest Sponsored by: John Heck! I always love to see you in the winners circle. I can hear the tune playing. And what a nice honor...thanks for naming me in the tune! Now I'm famous!!! I'm in a rock song. LOL Great job, dear friend. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 2/13/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sean. This was super! Connie
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:00:00 AM
Congrats with this winner Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your wecome comments today.What hue will green & blue shade into this weekend ?
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:02:00 PM
Sean, this is a quite magnificent piece >> many congratulations on your success in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Sean. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:15:00 PM
A great and fun write, Sean! Quite creative. Congrats on your success in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:38:00 PM
Way to go, sean, Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:15:00 PM
After that Hard Day's Night....I hope you are enjoying a rest............and proudly deserved!! Great work Sean!!
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:49:00 PM
Congrats Sean on your winning poem in the Beatlemania contest.. a wonderful write and a well deserved win ... happy to also be a winner with Jury-Mania... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry always.. luv.. Linda-Marie ..
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:11:00 PM
Excellent! I like this a lot. Airy, yet not flighty and leavened with true wit. A keeper, Sean. Thank you for kind remarks. They mean a lot. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:41:00 AM
Recognized it immediately. Good write that should do well. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2010 6:29:00 PM
This made me smile and sing.....darn it....now I can't get that tune out of my head!! :) Great job Sean....a sure fire winner!!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:08:00 PM
Wonderful writing... a winner to me... I like the "to name a few part"..lol... and thanks for the comment on my poetry
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:09:00 PM
Great stuff altogether, do you know it's impossible to read when you know the song, I found myself singing down through the whole poem/song. This will do really well Regards, Déirdre
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:26:00 PM
As usual Sean original and brilliant!
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:54:00 AM
Thanks Sean,and ditto for your New Year piece.Doubt if the saints will go marching in now! It's that old Munster mud ! again.Have a good day.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:31:00 PM
Dear Sean, thanks for including me in this list. I am honored. Love this! What a nice tribute to Poetry Soup. So creative. I say you've got a winner here. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 1/21/2010 12:02:00 PM
good one!! enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:50:00 AM
Sean, thanks for stopping by my haiku and introducing me to your amazing body of work. This one truly captures what has been my experience through these last few weeks since I posted my first poem. PoetrySoup is a wonderful community that is eliciting the very best from the members, both in terms of developing our personal writing ...but as important, in the way we inspire and encourage one another. Good luck in the contest with your very worthy entry.
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:44:00 AM
I bet you are gonna score high with this one, chap!!! It's a tune I was considering using, if I EVER get around to this one. You caputre the essence of the challenges here with your very own challenge entry. Good luck! Good write. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:17:00 PM
Oh, this is so cool! Should do real well on the contest, Sean. Good luck! It works very well with the Beatle song when I sing it and the lyrics are creative and then I see my name there among some outstanding poets. That brought a smile on my face. Thanks. Best wishes, Caroline.
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