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Happy Solitude

Co-authored by: Teddy Kimathi Sometimes I find bliss lying on a carpet of grass, and gazing at the moon - wondering whether it knows that stars surround it every time; wondering whether it knows some people have worshiped it for eons until now; wondering whether it knows I'm staring at it...... Entrapped by beauty enslaved to everlasting solitude ages come and go the peace of time remains; to the --desolate surface of the barren night wondering whether it knows, I'm mesmerized by its natural state with Solace to the open mind my spirit that of a recluse Wondering whether it knows the silent open sky is the enigma emerging from beyond, finding bliss, wondering whether it knows I'm captivated..... ~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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Date: 2/3/2017 4:11:00 PM
This is a beautiful collaboration. Congrats to you both!! The repetition- I wonder whether it knows- is. Wry effective! Best to both of you!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2017 1:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm applause, Kathy!!! I'm sure Linda will be really pleased when she reads this...
Date: 9/3/2015 1:07:00 PM
Powerful one. I love it. Congrats Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2015 3:57:00 PM
Asante sana Njeri! *^_^*
Date: 9/2/2015 11:12:00 PM
Congrats Teddy for a big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thanks for your applause Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 9/2/2015 5:48:00 PM
Teddy, that was beautiful...Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2015 3:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Skat! *^_^*
Date: 9/2/2015 3:12:00 PM
A captivating write Teddy and Linda many congrats on a wonderful collaboration:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*
Date: 9/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
hello Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2015 3:52:00 PM
Hi Linda. It was sure a fun filled contest! Thank you so much for your applause and the wonderful collaboration! I would only fantasize about what just happened. Certainly, you can add the poem to your poems list!!! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 8/1/2015 9:07:00 AM
Love this! Going to my fav list! ~lee
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Lee! ;-)

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