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H: Here on the earth we are A: Always busy with P: People and always at P: Places that work us to the bone. Y: You should come away and rest. S: Stop for just a moment A: A moment of pause from what wears you down B: Bask in the rest of your body B: Bring to life the renewal of the mind A: Allow for communication with God T: To give your soul renewed life! H: Have a restorative day.

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Date: 8/19/2023 3:10:00 AM
Beautiful read.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/19/2023 12:04:00 PM
Thank you for that.
Date: 8/13/2023 4:16:00 PM
It's a command from a God who loves us.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/13/2023 4:38:00 PM
It really is. Thank you for that.
Date: 8/13/2023 2:46:00 PM
so cool how you did this as acrostic. nice seeing you today, Miranda
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/13/2023 4:13:00 PM
Thank you. This was an easy write, well mostly.
Date: 8/12/2023 3:10:00 PM
A wonderful blessing in the words of your Acrostic poem, Miranda. Great advice and a good way to begin again. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/13/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for that. Have a great day yourself.
Date: 8/12/2023 1:17:00 PM
WOW!!! A lovely Acrostic write. I Love This One. Have a blessed day.............
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/12/2023 1:33:00 PM
Glad you like this one. Thank you!
Date: 8/10/2023 8:50:00 AM
Amen! well put together Acrostic poem Miranda God Bless.xx
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/10/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you for that. This one took a lot of thinking about.

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