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Happy Infants

The angry sound of rough and raging april tide, as waves anoint the awaiting rocky empty pools, as limpets always clinging on to every side, awaiting seagulls, anticipating Crustacean arrival Sad eyed donkeys in line each waiting and hoping a happy infant feeds a carrot each Sandcastles are built on the empty beach and knocked  over by a gang of senseless idiotic teenagers, already chatting and deftly arranging dates and times  on their own phones, each child of nature easily pleased again. Con/Vow contest

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Date: 3/3/2013 9:18:00 AM
Seren, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thanks PD....Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 6:31:00 AM
Seren,Congrarulations on your win!Great poem.
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Kash, many thanks for the comment ....Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 3:15:00 AM
Lol. Well done Seren. Big congratulations on your win. Big huggs. Deb
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Deborah ....Seren
Date: 3/2/2013 5:57:00 PM
congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/2/2013 6:25:00 PM
thanks Joseph
Date: 3/2/2013 1:20:00 PM
Well done poppet you did well once more love it star xx
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Date: 3/2/2013 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Mandy .....Seren
Date: 3/2/2013 11:26:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2013 1:49:00 PM
thank you Debbi...Seren
Date: 3/2/2013 10:23:00 AM
Seren congratulations on your placement in my contest, I hate to see sad donkeys but loved this little journey at the beach, well done...David
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Date: 3/2/2013 11:25:00 AM
thanks David, I had nearly forgotten about it. Seren
Date: 2/7/2013 7:02:00 AM
your poetry span, especially of time and eras, are very special,, in my mind this paints todays picture.. if i'm wrong still love the poem...
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:07:00 PM
No your right Harrry, so love away....Seren
Date: 2/4/2013 10:51:00 AM
Hi love this , very clever .. xx soup
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 8:24:00 PM
hi thx Mandy..Seren
Date: 2/3/2013 9:53:00 PM
This is a wonderful and harmonious consonant vowel entry! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have superior writing skills, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 8:24:00 PM
Thank you Russell

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