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Happy Infants

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Happy Infants

                         The angry sound of rough and
                       raging april tide, as waves anoint
                      the awaiting rocky empty pools, as
                      limpets always clinging on to every
         side, awaiting seagulls, anticipating Crustacean arrival

             Sad eyed donkeys in line each waiting and hoping a
                          happy infant feeds a carrot each
                    
                      Sandcastles are built on the empty
                         beach and knocked  over by a
                gang of senseless idiotic teenagers, already
                   chatting and deftly arranging dates and
                       times  on their own phones, each
                     child of nature easily pleased again.





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  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Seren, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD....Seren
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Seren,Congrarulations on your win!Great poem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash, many thanks for the comment ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:15:00 AM
    Lol. Well done Seren. Big congratulations on your win. Big huggs. Deb

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Deborah ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:57:00 PM
    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/2/2013 6:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Joseph
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Well done poppet you did well once more love it star xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/2/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy .....Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/2/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Debbi...Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Seren congratulations on your placement in my contest, I hate to see sad donkeys but loved this little journey at the beach, well done...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/2/2013 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks David, I had nearly forgotten about it. Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:02:00 AM
    your poetry span, especially of time and eras, are very special,, in my mind this paints todays picture.. if i'm wrong still love the poem...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/7/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No your right Harrry, so love away....Seren
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Hi love this , very clever .. xx soup

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi thx Mandy..Seren
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:53:00 PM
    This is a wonderful and harmonious consonant vowel entry! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have superior writing skills, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/4/2013 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell