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Happy Fourth of July America Lest We Forget

Cold…dry…statistics Wanna know how many lil’ kids Go to bed hungry in the U.SA Each night? If I said “over a million” Would you sleep any less sound tonight? And how many of you Would agree with me That being a kid can be rough? Well…over six million American kids Get either very little food…each day Or simply not enough. Feelin’ uncomfortable yet? I hope so!!! Think about it, when you’re chowin’ down This bountiful 4th of July Foreign aid paid in one year to 150 countries Including some enemies, is well over 60 billion, more or less All paid by you and I Our roads and bridges need 2.4 trillion dollars To be repaired and fixed And brought up to a safe state And all the while America crumbles We’ve spent more than a trillion (not including Libya) If futile wars in Afghanistan and Iraq… to date And one other lil’ statisticThat I carped about before on the 4th of July a couple years ago In a little noticed, seemingly inconsequential poem Has grown to 6440 American boys killed in action I hate this statistic!! It’s cruel and sadistic!! And By God… they should have been kept home!!! These are numbers and statistics Too great for comprehension… by Ordinary people like you and I But I hope there’s someone out there That I’ve made a little bit more aware And… to complacent, naïve Americans A bountiful, happy Fourth of July

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2012 5:05:00 PM
A "wake up"!!! poem David, very well written. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:43:00 AM
David - a powerful "in your face" message! Keep carping!
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:06:00 AM
Hi. I tried to find your "little noticed, seemingly inconsequential poem"... without success... (thought I could 'notice' it a bit...) Terry
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 6/28/2012 8:16:00 PM
Thanks much Terry, for reading and commenting. I will return the favor shortly, and I'm sure I'll fine some good work there, since with a name like Terry O'leary how could you not write well. We Irish know our drinkin" and our poetry!thanks again Terry, appreciate ya"
Date: 6/28/2012 7:00:00 AM
Wonderful poem... dire message... 'when will they ever learn?'... Terry
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