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I love Spring I am a spring baby for me i rejoyce when she comes lightening our hearts with her colour and warmth yes glorious warmth lol.

Once more we see the signs of the restart as nature wakens plants with her magic art. We laugh as at long last winter does depart leaving us full of joy and light of heart. Leafy branches conceal from sight the hart by the still pond bees and dragonflies dart. The lovers dreamily stare then drift apart startled as one of the cows gives off a fart. The posy opens slyly showing off its blackheart only to be smothered by the nettle upstart. The cook is busy making a large fruit tart while in the parlour the cows gives us a quart. Spring so full of promise show us your heart as you bring vibrant life and a brand new start.

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Date: 9/6/2018 8:30:00 AM
Me also admit Spring as king of Season. Enjoyed cheerful spring thru your poem. You are a spring baby. I am born in hot Summer. Love.
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Date: 5/27/2018 12:06:00 PM
Shadow, the love in nature is spoken it lovely natures write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/26/2018 1:00:00 PM
This is so very creative, well-written and impressive with its imagery that it truly drew me in to stroke my poetry adrenaline. Simply lovely and beyond, a true joy to read, Shadow. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:30:00 AM
what a vibrant poem Shadow - and as for the line about farting cows that is hilarious! Will see if my muse will come up with a nature poem for you:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2018 8:58:00 AM
Spring in my local, bits and bob, one day striped nigh naked, next, dress for winter. Certainly felt the warmth in your poem. Mick
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Date: 5/22/2018 8:18:00 AM
Promising Spring: Vibrant Spring to welcome. So nicely composed. I admire.
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Date: 3/21/2018 11:51:00 AM
A vibrant imagery of spring..well written poem!
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