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Happy Birthday Conor

Happy birthday Conor, Today’s your special day. As I write these words, You are so far way. You’re a special person who, Deserves deserving words. So I penned some down, That this day deserves. Today you are eighteen; I hope you have a blast. I wish you a happy one, From Oklahoma to Belfast. ___________________________ This poem is for Conor Jordan, a fellow souper and today's his birthday.

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Date: 12/30/2008 5:10:00 AM
Very nicely written and it's amazing how you've made the words rhyme! It's a very sweet poem all in all and of course touching.. Aakanksha
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Date: 12/28/2008 2:12:00 AM
Hope you had a Happy Birthday and a Merry Christmas. ~Caramel
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:38:00 PM
Congrats to making the hot list. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:28:00 PM
Good poem. You have such a heart to think of others in your poems . And thank you for your words regarding mine ....Matt
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Date: 12/20/2008 1:26:00 PM
What a kind giving heart you have, dear Raul. Lovely poem. lainie
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Date: 12/20/2008 2:38:00 AM
HJappy birthday Conor!!!!! You are such a gift, Raul, bless you always, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/19/2008 4:10:00 PM
Happy birthday Conor eighteenth is a special birthday. May you have many more and best wishes to you. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/19/2008 2:22:00 PM
Nice birthday poem. excellent.
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Date: 12/19/2008 1:51:00 PM
Happy Birthday!, and many many more to your friend. You are a true friend to so many, Raul....Bless you and wishing you a blessed Holiday!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/19/2008 1:42:00 PM
Bests wishes to Conor, May he spend a lovley day with his family and friends. May all your wishes come true. Happy Birthday. DN
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Date: 12/19/2008 10:08:00 AM
Happy birthday Conor! Raul, you are a prince of poets. I agree with Robin, may it all come back to you three-fold if not more. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/19/2008 9:50:00 AM
Lovely dedication. This is penned perfectly, Raul. I'm sure Conor likes his present! As always, thank you for sharing all your wonderful words with everyone. I have heard the expresion that what we do comes back to us three-fold. I wish you all the glory you deserve. Love Robin
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Date: 12/19/2008 6:00:00 AM
Raul your heart is wonderful.
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