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Happy Birthday

A friend, forever found to pick me up when I'm down Let's me be myself and I've never had to watch her turn around Incased in a closed shell, hides the deepest poet She's to afraid to open, so she grabs the door to close it Over the rainbow, she's the pot of gold that I found Noticed that beautiful smile, she taught me how to never look down Missed my shot a couple times, but I still dribble the ball At first impression I never thought I could make her my all Till the first kiss who knew, the hard work payed off Tomorrow doesn't have to come as long her lips stay soft How could someone sweep someone so far, so fast, it was all luck Every old friend jealous because we ditched them, because we were us We stay true eachother, we're poetic and we'll always be Say goodbye to the past, cause without you there's no me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/1/2013 12:53:00 AM
Didn't even notice the acrostic bonus to this before hand... nice touch!
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Date: 5/1/2013 12:47:00 AM
Wow, Aaron... I'm so happy for you! I like to see things turning around for you and it show in your writing. I've been on a trip and haven't had time for the Soup... you're still just as thoughtful and poetic as I remember. Fantastic writing as always!
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