Happy Arrival

* a window opens to restless feet of summer... the curtain dances * For Brian's contest "Whatever"

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 8:26:00 PM

Very clever, Carrie. You are so creative. What a lovely poetic soul you have.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 11:04:00 AM

Carrie,..what a great haiku,and congrats! thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 4:45:00 PM

oh, my gosh, send this in to one of those classy haiku magazines, Carrie. They are fools if they don't take it! congratulations.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/15/2011 12:05:00 PM

Such a creative personification here, dear Carrie! Congrats! By the way "Happy Birthday to youuuuuuuu!!!!! :)" Love, iolanda

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/15/2011 5:40:00 AM

Love it Carrie. such great imagery in your first and esp. last last line culminating your personification of summer. "the palpable excitement in"the curtain dances". :) Awesome. I greatly respect your poetic talents. top choice and a great honor in Brian's contest