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Happiness Is a Balloon

Happiness is a balloon like a momentary pleasure it will fade away soon time is the eraser. Like a momentary pleasure a balloon soaring high time is the eraser soon disappears from sky. A balloon soaring high into the deep blue soon disappears from sky sad but this is true. Into the deep blue our moments of joy sad but this is true like a child's brittle toy. Our moments of joy it will fade away soon like a child's brittle toy happiness is a balloon. © kash poet( 24th July 2011) ============================ Placement:11th ;(July 2011) By:kash poet Contest:Happiness is a balloon Date:25th July 2011

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Date: 8/3/2011 1:12:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2011 3:34:00 PM
Very nice write. Congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:45:00 PM
Ah, I read it earlier and enjoyed - many congratulations, Kash : )
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:14:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:01:00 PM
Lovely write, Kash
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:17:00 AM
congrats on your win, Kash. Keep up those happy pantoum poems.
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Date: 7/29/2011 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful and meaningful poem, Kashinath. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/29/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Francine's "Balloon" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:40:00 PM
This is a great Pantoum. congratulations Kashinath. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:04:00 PM
congrats Kashinath for your 11th place win in the contest, well done
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:55:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on another great win for excellent creativity in poetry.. lovely words my friend for the balloon contest ..
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:40:00 PM
Fascinating arrangement of words. And a lovely picture to boot. Well done Kash!
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Date: 7/28/2011 8:42:00 PM
Don't you just hate that moment when the balloon fades into the sky and the joy is erased. Sad but meaningful poem, dear friend. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:42:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very good work indeed..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Have a great eve..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2011 6:58:00 AM
kashi, come visit!.. any new poem: miss ya! :) huggs, nette.. SOUP MAIL
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Date: 7/26/2011 6:38:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one Kash, wishing you all the best for Francine's contest.. Quick soupmail ;)
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:46:00 PM
I really enjoy your pantoums, all of them, Kashinath. THis is so happy and yet with its tinge of melancholy as well. I hope it does well in the contest. I am here way too late today. I'm on a time limit these days and I've gone way over my limit tonight! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2011 5:35:00 PM
Epic! Have fallen in love with this style of poem writing..
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:36:00 PM
i'd like to soar with thos balloon. kashi.. winning treat for sure.. come visit my pages! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:03:00 AM
Kash this has to be a number one entry luv.. such emotion ..such personality for the balloon..such a lovely form.. good luck my friend.. truly beautiful..
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