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Happiness and Disgust

When happy kids play in snow and fall face-down that gives me the broadest smile. I frown at people who litter, wondering if they do it at home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/29/2012 12:28:00 AM
i hope the broadest smiles are the one that litter.. great stuff, andrew and best wishes..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/27/2012 11:41:00 PM
In some places, there is a five hundred dollar fine for littering. Good pair of senryu.
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:10:00 PM
this is really great, Andrew. I like the unique way you did your senryu for the contest. nice seeing you tonight.
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