Happiness

What can make us happy Who is happy? Let's see, one with a smile Or one with peace And let's say a one with money The smile will fade With the changing weather And the money will go With the blowing wind Only the peace will stay Forever with you Even if you have no one It will be your companion How to be happy? It's super simple Just, add good friends Subtract bad deeds Multiply your knowledge And divide your greediness And if we say in our daily life We just have to follow these days Rise up with the rising sun Cheer up with the singing linnets Walk with the natures beauty And that's all ,you're happy than ever.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:18:00 PM

Tenzin, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/21/2016 8:40:00 PM

The best rant of today. I don't know much about your money situation. But this is freaking awesome. Skat

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/21/2016 10:57:00 AM

I liked it well written, but what if money never ended and the smile kept on because you had money and you had the peace of god you were kind and give to the poor xx Ha Ha Would I bee happy yes x

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/27/2016 4:15:00 AM

Hi Tenzin on reading back my message i am so sorry that it sounded like a criticism your poem is a very excellent poem And you are right inner peace means more than anything in the world x Please forgive my insensitive words x

Tenzin Dayoe
Date: 6/21/2016 11:57:00 AM

Nothing is permanent except of inner peace