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Happiness

Sunshine Punches sadness floating on clouds weightless delighted happiness will follow I shine Written by : Corrina

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Date: 5/7/2015 2:56:00 AM
Nice cinquain on happiness. I like the line "floating on clouds weightless". Beautiful.
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/7/2015 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment :)..If I could live in the clouds I would !
Date: 5/6/2015 4:36:00 PM
Happiness is like being on cloud nine...nice write...
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/6/2015 7:05:00 PM
I do agree thanks ;)

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