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Happily Born

Through the screams of pain, I heard a cry, A cry that indicated a birth of a new life. Sitting in the hospital corridor, I could hear the cry of happiness from tiny lungs, I could experience the same happiness, The family was going through. Yes a girl child! I thought to myself, She might be lucky, She has a modern family who cared for her Thank god! she did not go through the pain of being killed. This world has learnt to accept a girl child! I am happy.............

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 1/3/2017 11:17:00 PM

Very thoughtful....congrats!:)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/9/2016 1:19:00 PM

Excellent. This is great and awesome. A definite 7

John Hamilton

Date: 4/22/2016 9:54:00 AM

Nice Ahalya congrats on POTD welcome to the soup you are obviously talented, look forward to more.

Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:56:00 PM

AHALYA NAIR, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/20/2016 12:10:00 AM

Hello Skat:) thank you so much for those positive comments....im 17 years old...i love writing poems as i can present my views through my poems...all the poets i came across in poetry soup are very talented so i was a bit nervous when i posted my first poem....but then to my surprise their support just made me more confident...i thank you all for welcoming me with open arms..:)

Lewis Raynes

Date: 4/19/2016 3:04:00 AM

great write Liam, very relaxing, thanks for a great poem Liam my friend.

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 3:10:00 AM

Thank you Lewis Raynes

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/19/2016 3:07:00 AM

ooops wrong one, hey this is beautiful, and yep it made me think about the wrongs that have been done in the past, very good write Ahalya, a7

Moon Flower

Date: 4/18/2016 9:58:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD and keep on writing!

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:38:00 AM

Thank you Moon Flower:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/18/2016 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations Ahalya, an excellent selection for POTD...

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:39:00 AM

Thank you charlie Smith:)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/18/2016 5:27:00 PM

Ahalya, Congratulations on the POTD honor!! A moving poem for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Gary Bateman

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2016 12:44:00 PM

Very nice ending. A great write Ahalya. Congratulation on ur POTD.............with love.

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Manmath Dalei:)

Marilyn Williams

Date: 4/18/2016 12:36:00 PM

Interest thought on new life. Congrats on your POTD.

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Marilyn Williams

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2016 12:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Ahalya - // Anne-Lise :)

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/19/2016 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise Andersen

James Inman

Date: 4/18/2016 11:03:00 AM

Profound write Ahalya.

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/18/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thank you james inman

Kirthi Pillai

Date: 4/16/2016 7:16:00 AM

This is one good piece!

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/16/2016 8:33:00 AM

Thank you kirthi pillai

Date: 4/16/2016 6:06:00 AM

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. Bravo!!

Ahalya Nair
Date: 4/16/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much