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Hapi Godess of the Nile

From cradle to grave the sun baked the skin leather, un-oiled and rain did not fall for Isis with held her tears. From the bloody care of womb children popped like bread from the oven of women, the urns of life, earthen were their colors ocher, saffron, and some as black as basalt, rich… with a Nubian glow. How the small ones squeal at the wadi’s edge. How the toes of man and beast dance at the skirt of mother Nile, sensuous, rippling with the wind, or placid in the doldrums of summer sun.

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Date: 8/25/2011 12:55:00 PM
it's all about the imagery, content, and internal phrasing .. … special KUDOS to you for a captivating win!...huggs!
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:35:00 AM
hey Debbie congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Debbie
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Tracie's "Write like an Egyptian" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:28:00 AM
ovens of women the urns of life, love an death and sacrifice, great words you use little babe, perhaps you were a scribe or sage... great poetry babe
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Date: 8/24/2011 11:34:00 PM
Such crystal clear images this write of yours have evoked in me. Wonderful Deb and many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:29:00 PM
I knew this would be the perfect contest for you, Deb, and you sure delivered. Definitely one of your best and I'm delighted to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:18:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your spectacular win with this brilliant beauty write.. never knew there was a happy goddess of the Nile but sure do now luv thankxx to this delight...enjoy..
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Date: 8/24/2011 8:12:00 PM
Congrats on your 8th place win in my contest Debbie xxx
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Date: 2/2/2011 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Nette I see a boo-boo too! I meant "rain did not fall!" if not for you I wouldn't have noticed!
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:54:00 AM
dang, debs! a bombardment of visceral images taking me to different prisms of the theme---from impressionist shades to realistic descriptions of the nile.. how you even blend metaphors and personifications then pull it through as one unified thought amazes me no end! my head spins! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:56:00 PM
Not sure about this title if anyone has a better one?
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:38:00 AM
Nothing like waking up & reading an excellent poem about Isis. Did you know that rose petals were thrown throughout the church services during the roman period... thanks Julie Heckman
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:09:00 PM
oh, this is wonderful, I enjoyed this very much! It is rich in imagery, closed my eyes, could see this:) Thanks for comment ... I will choose one right away and enter your contest!
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:19:00 AM
Oh, how I love this imagery and these issues. Metaphors and sculpture - with feeling and fantasy! Already becoming cycle with Egyptian themes. Continue, please.
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Date: 1/11/2011 10:32:00 PM
gorgeous poem, Deb. And yes, Black Swan started already, did I tell you? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:42:00 AM
Another wonderful topic and beautiful write on the country of Pyramids. Thank you for the information about the contest. I need at least one-day time to do something on the topic relating to my country. I will try my best if it would be possible to submit it by tomorrow evening. Love and best wishes ..Ravindra...Deborah Guzzi
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:12:00 AM
Mesmerizing piece Debbie.. Egypt is a mysterious country and Isis a unique goddess to research.. luv your opening lines so intense and dramatic TEACH... brilliant ...luv..
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