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Hannah's Eighteenth Birthday

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Written on 3/9/23 for my grandaughter's birthday.

Lovely young woman, Full of charm and wonder, Your life lies before you, Plans and dreams to ponder. No longer a child, Today you're eighteen, And what you'll become, Remains to be seen. The whole world is yours, With opportunities galore. Spread your wings and fly, There's so much to explore!

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Date: 7/10/2023 4:03:00 PM
Smashing, Kim. I bet she’s chuffed with this. Terry
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Terry! She liked it very much.
Date: 7/8/2023 6:20:00 AM
It reminds me of my children leaving the nest. Great poem
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2023 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Catherine!
Date: 7/4/2023 8:13:00 PM
A simple blessing!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/7/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 7/2/2023 3:40:00 AM
Hi Kim, that was a lovely tribute to your granddaughter. God Bless.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/7/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 6/25/2023 10:48:00 AM
a beautiful poem for your granddaughter, kim! i hope she appreciated it...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/7/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene! She was very touched by it.
Date: 6/25/2023 10:28:00 AM
A lovely write. This would make a great card. Have a blessed day/week............
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/25/2023 2:13:00 AM
what a lovely birthday tribute to a very special young lady . Hope she has a lovely day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!

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