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Hanging Down To Your Navel

What are those dangly things hanging down to your navel Are they melons... you can rest them here on the table Glad I don't have those They add charm I suppose Pretty dang sure though, they'd make me unstable © Jack Ellison 2015

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Viv Wigley

Date: 3/18/2015 1:56:00 AM

My missus would agree with you though they're useful for clearing the snow. (Don't tell her I said that). Nice one, Jack. Viv

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2015 7:04:00 AM

Whoaaaa! You are treading on dangerous ground!!! LOL

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/17/2015 6:55:00 PM

G'day Jack... Be careful what you wish for Jack. By the way um... a dag in reality is mattered wool around a sheeps tail. Just thought I'd let you know. Of course the word has been transferred to mean someone who gives us all a giggle nowadays. And that's you Jack - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2015 7:52:00 PM

Saw that definition too! See... ya gotta get up pretty early to get ahead of "young" Jack!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/17/2015 2:20:00 PM

You have to go to the beach to change your outlook : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2015 4:44:00 PM

LOL Think I'd keep falling on my face if I had those!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/17/2015 1:07:00 PM

Dragon and I think you're having a VERY unusual day... Don't know if we should comment to this one???? LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2015 1:16:00 PM

UNUSUAL DAY!!! You are very observant my dear Carol!!! xxx