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Just beneath the throat is a hot porridge the body knocks down but still operate heat all over, jump into the nearest fridge sight shivers in its domain so temperate morning light is covered by one big ridge aches and weariness don't want to separate from the stomach to the mouth is a bridge for a crazy out pour to generate since last sweet night, the mind is in a flop quick and short morbidity from its groove sips and gulps in an interplay nonstop require the next coffee to disapprove long consciousness puts the being back on top back to normal and Life is on the move.

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Date: 3/4/2016 8:42:00 AM
Oh this is clever and different, and a joy to read..
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry
Date: 3/4/2016 4:50:00 AM
Makes me so glad I don't drink! great sonnet Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:10:00 AM
hahahahahahaha... It's good you don't. Thank you very much for the comment
Date: 3/2/2016 10:09:00 AM
You have a way with words my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Richard
Date: 3/2/2016 10:04:00 AM
You said it. I've been there. Good stuff, Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:09:00 AM
thank you very much austin
Date: 3/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
Funom, this is quite the dark write, with some great vocabulary, I am loving it 7 ~
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Broken Wings

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