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HAND OF GOD The deluge came like splattered tears, palm’s held out to see if it was real. Hemlines lifted as feet kicked against the water. The scourge of cold could be felt on their backs - throngs of men, women, sons, and daughters. Locked inside a cavernous boat, the saved, like latchkey kids of the Most High. Blinded from the pain of angry screams, attending to the cries of the hungry wild. Eventually, the water deepened and lifted the ark from the muddy ground. Was there anyone left to wish them well, to wave, to cheer? The Lord pats the roof and sends them on their way – for 40 days and 40 nights. God pulled out his list and crossed off: Deluge of complaints Deluge of suffering Deluge of immorality Deluge of selfishness Deluge of sin 2nd Place 8/27/2016 Contest: A Deluge Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 9/12/2016 11:02:00 AM
I like that. God and his tick box. Congratulations and wishes, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 9/10/2016 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful imagery. I can feel the emotion evoked...Sunita.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2016 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita! :)
Date: 9/10/2016 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Date: 9/10/2016 4:59:00 PM
Kim, wonderful poem you wrote here, congrats on your fine placement :)-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo!
Date: 9/10/2016 12:32:00 PM
I like the way you addressed the theme, Kim. Very creative and well-written. Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Hugs :)
Date: 8/27/2016 3:27:00 PM
ever pouring with graceful expressions, kim... fine write!..huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2016 11:07:00 PM
I don't know how the question marks got there...lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2016 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! ??

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