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Halloween Treat

Web of excitement Ghosts that follow you around And pumpkins are carved With trees spreading in moonlight Monsters play in your backyard Russell Sivey

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/22/2012 7:46:00 PM

A great tanka on Halloween here Russell!Love this.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/22/2012 6:13:00 PM

This is a treat. You have conquered Halloween with your many tanka. Thanks for sharing them all.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 5:47:00 PM

So cute . this must be one of your halloween writes I missed last night. I sent you a soupmail but forgot if I made you aware of it or not.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/22/2012 4:11:00 PM

ghouls from the grave do creep, an pumpkins pretending to be sheep, don't come near the misletoe, cos death it waits just down below, nuff 2 give ya the creeps, look out you bloody sheep, HO HO... re Russell Siveys 'Halloween Treat' Don

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2012 12:25:00 PM

love this one, Russell - I'm in Halloween mode now too : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2012 11:00:00 AM

you got my attention right till the end, russell... one breathless read with" trees spreading in moonlight.." greeat stuff my friend!..:)

Cory Long

Date: 8/22/2012 5:06:00 AM

yes, yes they do.. I have two monsters in my back yard all yr round lol.. great write. I love your halloween spirit. have a great day :)