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Halloween Scare

Freezing sweat trickled down my back, soaking me as I fled It felt like the hounds of hell were catching up to me. Quivering with terror I raced through the undergrowth I could feel their breath both scorchingly hot yet icy cold. All around me grusome things lurked that clutched me nomentally breaking my stride slowing down my flight. The graze of a fang sent panic rushing through my body and I could feel the infection spreading rapidly. My blood was turning icy cold as the virus took hold Tufts of fur appearing from my ears and nostrils. I stumbled onwards making for the druid settlement It felt like the gates of hell were open pulling me down. With a last surge I broke through to what? Heaven or hell? Halloween Scare contest 10/15/2017

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:11:00 PM
Love the first person experience Shadow, intensifies the write and makes it much more personal.
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Shadow - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 3:14:00 PM
Hi Shadow,,, wonderful scary poem :) Congrats ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/15/2017 3:01:00 PM
Nice! A pulse quickening pen! Found myself reading faster and faster, a thrilling read:) my best to you for the contest! xomo
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Date: 10/15/2017 2:58:00 PM
Well done ... This is a great poem. have a nice day my friend.
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