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Halloween Night

Moon is out tonight Bright and full of life within The bats are about Flying thru an old mansion The one with Jack-O-Lanterns Eerie fence outside Keeps in skeletons of old Past engraved on stone Ancient trees hide fearful dreams Searing thoughts into one’s mind Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2012 9:34:00 PM

spectacular piece with that touch of eerie Halloween flavor plus more.. last two lines are amazing Russell luv.. a masterful creation .. soon trick or treat time will arrive.. a perfect preface to the Season luv..

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/21/2012 9:00:00 PM

I can almost here the late Bobby "Boris" Pickett singing "Monster Mash" as I read this delightful double tanka. Good write for that season which is still more than two months away.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2012 8:34:00 PM

hmm, maybe I goofed on the triolet. DAng it I better look up the form in my book again!!! I see you are getting set for halloween already!! Ghostly!!

Cory Long

Date: 8/21/2012 8:00:00 PM

tankas are a good form for you.. love your poem .. thanks for your comments and stopping by.. cory