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Halloween Haiku

moonlight follows me.. stepping through crackling leaves.. a shadow peaks out.. by Michael J Falotico 10/24/11 P.D.'s Halloween Haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 8:23:00 PM

congrats. I'd have placed it even higher!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2011 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Michael

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/31/2011 12:35:00 PM

This one is brief......yet a lovely pause of suspense awaits around the corner.....shhhhhh.......I can hear him.......BOO!!!!!! lol. Congrats, MIchael! Hope u are doing well....A few hours til the haunting hour arrives here in Ohio....I think I will be hateful to the trick or treater this year and pass out homework assignments...that'lll freak em out!! ha ha. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2011 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/30/2011 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2011 7:17:00 PM

Congrats Michael luv on a super win with this stunning Halloween Haiku luv.. enjoy the holiday with spirit..oh.. and so glad the GMEN squeezed out that win today.. I was so worried.. did u get much snow? we got four inches down here..oh I dislike cold and snow...where is the beach and heat?????xoxo...J.G. in bundled up mode..

Shannon Deane

Date: 10/30/2011 5:15:00 PM

Congrats to you on your win in the haiku contest...luv shannon

M.I.A .

Date: 10/30/2011 4:33:00 PM

Good luck also for this one too Michael. Happy Halloween and loved the part where 'moonlight follows me...' ;D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/30/2011 2:52:00 PM

MICHAEL , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/29/2011 8:51:00 AM

Hi Michael--ooooooooh, what is lurking in the shadow? Love your haiku! Good luck on the contest! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:43:00 PM

I LOVE it. One STRONG limerick better than two or three mediocre ones!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2011 10:39:00 AM

thank you for the support,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2011 10:15:00 AM

hope that shadow is luv Michael.. and the moonlight is a nice touch .. crackling leaves a bit scary.. need arms to protect me..haha.. awesome..good luck in PD's contest on Halloween.. we are preparing for a big party ..mostly family.. some friends.. and our new neighbors on either side of our huge driveways.. oh.. xoxo..

Cory Long

Date: 10/24/2011 9:21:00 AM

nicely done.. cory

Shannon Deane

Date: 10/24/2011 8:59:00 AM

Happy Halloween Michael, very nice haiku, luck to you in the contest...luv shannon

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 10/24/2011 8:37:00 AM

Hello nice reading, a halloween night pictured! Anoucheka :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 6:22:00 AM

I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Michael. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol