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Halloween Haiku

The devil trembles Feeling the autumn wind's rage Children eat candy Red mask covers eyes Blind to first fall carnival Her pockets picked clean Nevermore lovers Halloween murders-blood found Quote the black raven

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2016 8:33:00 PM

Shirley, I like these haiku. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 12:20:00 PM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/15/2010 4:03:00 AM

wow liked this one and congrats on placement in contest really like the last one for I just love ravens also thanks for your kind comments on my poem too keep up the great writing blessings to you and family

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2010 6:04:00 AM

nice Poe touch poetry win. congratulations on a fine win Shirley

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/11/2010 10:13:00 AM

congrats on your win with this spooky entry

John Freeman

Date: 9/11/2010 12:21:00 AM

Congratulations Shirley on your big in the contest. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 10:56:00 PM

This is really nicely done, Shirley Congratulations to you! Luv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/10/2010 8:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2010 7:03:00 PM

Congratultions on this win in the contest, Shirley

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/10/2010 6:21:00 PM

ooh chilly haiku over here Shirley-- congrats on your win -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 5:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Shirley. Love Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 2:13:00 PM

Very cool writing, Shirley Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2010 1:47:00 PM

Congrats Shirley on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry full of spooky lines ..luv the last.. of Halloween flavor... thankxxx for your constant support luv..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/10/2010 7:33:00 AM

Very Shakespearish, I enjoyed reading this wonderful Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 4:08:00 PM

Fine Shirley..unique and original..leave it alone ..its a competition.. and unusual is always good.. thankxxx for supporting this contest...luv.it ..

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/6/2010 3:42:00 PM

OOOOOOooooOOOOOOoo. I never go out during halloween when I hear them knocking. You never know if one is a real gremlin

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/6/2010 3:27:00 PM

Quite scary and spooky!Best of luck in the contest..Take care~Deb

Skat A

Date: 9/6/2010 2:19:00 PM

Nice and well done, enjoyed your Haiku, GooDluck in the cOntest*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 2:18:00 PM

spooky, good one, good luck in the contest